When You Touched
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Loading ...I wrote this poem to my boyfriend, Stuart, when we broke up, and now we are happily back together. I love you baby . x x x x
When you touched me like this, and held me like that,
you remember what it felt like and i want it back.
And when you kissed me like this, and whispered like that,
how did you feel with me in your arms like that?
If i touched you like this, and held you like that,
you’d remember what it felt like but would you want me back?
And if i kissed you like this, and whispered like that,
would you hold me in your arms again.
So you could kiss me like that, and hold me like this,
and we’d be back together, and i could whisper like this,
and you could touch me like that,
and we’d be back together in each others arms
and share the love we used to have.
We can forget the stupid things we did,
and heartless things we said, and start new and look ahead.
We wont look back, at what happened to us,
we will make the most of the here and now,
and be happy together atlast.
x x x x
By Beck Heinicke
Filed under: Break Up Poems and Poetry
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i love this poem
WHAT THE BORING
AWWWWWWW!!!!
kinky poem
beck?
is this poem about me??,
but WE ARENT BACK TOGETHER!!
YOUR UGLY, thats why i dumped you.
beck, your ugly. and plus we were together for TWO DAYS!!
you are ugly
i would never ever touch you, or kiss you or anything.
YOU ARE UGLY BECk! UGLY!
love from stuart.
Stuart your frikin ugly .
and your mean , =]
Ninja: wow stuart. wtf is your problem. she wrote a poem for you and put it on the internet, and you go and bash on her. you deserve to be eaten by a rubber duck.
vampire: shut up ninja…he doesnt deserve to be eaten by a rubber duck,
Ninja: what then?
Vampire: By ME!!!!!! haha
Ninja: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
I just stumbled upon this page. I do find the poem somewhat endearing and very heart felt, reminds me of a certain Celene Dion song I must say. But I would not waste your breath over this Stuart one, whether you are together or not, he aparently doesn’t seem to recipricate your love and I think you should move on. Save your lovely poetry for someone who appreciates it and loves you back.
Stuart don’t be so rude, whether you think she is attractive or not, someone out there will think she is the most beautiful person in the world. It is cliched but Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Whether it was two days or two months or two hours, you obviously fancied her enough to give it a go. So stop trying to publically embarress the girl and grow up.
my boy friend justbrooke up with me and i want him back but don’t no how 2 he say’s i to shy and he can’t under stand i not but around hi, i am b/c i date a guy like him and he did some thing’s to me and i donot no how to let him in got any help 4 me
i love this poem but dont wiast it on this dumb azz he so f***ing retarded
and stuart stfu she sound nice so shut ur mouth u fag
Hahaha….good one!….What would be funnier if you SAID to him…along with the actions…lol..that’s be a sight…Especially the expression on his face……haha…I just played out my girlfriend doing that to me…lol…Hell…I’d never leave her if she did that to me…..Good one (Y)
Hey i love the poem ignore this jerk don’t waist ur time on him he is obviousley not worth the time
ew ur ugly, like my bffl harry jr. hes gunna write u soon.
hahha im on here! u suck! and u look like a booger!!
i seen u b4 u lloookkkk like a ape, u freaakking harry jr. (and im not affending my name either!)
wtf stuart ur being a f****** a**hole ur poor girlfriend probably feels horrible right now
hey there .. i am from K.S.A
that means i am a saudi girl
i think your poem is so so so so beautiful.. and i wonder how did you write it 4 such a fool
luv u and keep on
when i close my eyes all i see is your eyes an i just imagen your here with me. im in your arms an can feel the beat of your heart run through me sending chills down my spine.
one touch an i melt
just for
you.
for felipe xox
stuart ur a f****** a**hole wtf beck is probly feeling so upset like f***
becc im srry 4 what i did now please take me back i miss u!!!! i love u!
pleaz take me back!
dude! stuart! your the man bro! keep on rockin stuart!!!!!
sweet
Hiya Peeps!!
English Gal Ere!! =)
Beck, Why Bother With This P****!?
Please Dont Listen To Him When He Says To Take Him Back AL Men Are The Same…
Full Of B*ll-S*t!!
Your Poem Is So Gentle And Beautiful..
It Reminds Me Of Memories I’ve Had In The Past!
You Tell The World How You Feel,
Let That C**t Get F***ed Over By
Someone Then He’ll Know What It Feels Like!!
=) Be Yourself & Take Care!
Lots Of Love xx
ha ha hah ha o he he he ha
I thought my Jokes were bad!!!!!
awww i love this poem!
it’s so kute!
haha
wow this poem is somewhat stupid and good at the same time i know how this girl felt when she wrote this poem me and my boyfriend have went through some hard times we broke up for like 2days and got back together and are really happy now and will hopefully be happy for the rest of our lives together
i love this poem it explains me and my boyfriends so much
you should never write a poem again.
and you all need to get a life. this site is awful. please leave poetry to poets. thank you.
i love this pome!!!!!!!!
right on!!!!!!!!!!
wow. i luv that poem. i wish i could say it 2 my ex, but he wood just laf and do the hand wave thingy and wut evr with him cuz now theres another guy (but not as good).
hay this is a rely good pome u rot here
i love this poemm it reminds me of my ex..
we datedd a yearr andd a monthh andd we brokee upp onn ourr anniversaryy..o1.18.o8-o2.18.o9
i miss himm andd i wishh we couldd be friendds at leastt..
justt keepp it up..
ilovedit”!
i give this poem a thumbs up i wish i wrote this to my ex wink wink