Poor Girl

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Poor girl she cries,
she could never see why,
Daddy would always beat her,
until she almost died.
She woke up this morning,
Pale as the moon,
she watched her father yell
how his face made her gloom.

She went to see mommy
she wasn’t in sight,
She was scared she left,
Tonight.
Daddy came to her,
Smacked her once,
He said”You did this!
you did it to us!”

She cried in pain held to her arm,
Daddy looked mad,
he grabbed her arm,
He yanked he pulled,
He through her down,
All she said”Was daddy !”
Daddy got to mad she could see his face

The sound of his screams,
The way her blood taste.

Finally it was over,
Daddy stopped the hurt,
He killed his little daughter
and didn’t feel hurt.

By Krisina P


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18 Responses to “Poor Girl”

  1. I think the poem about the poor girl is really sad and i dont like it.

  2. how is this a funny poem????

  3. omg this poem is so sad

  4. this is sad why would a dad kill his own daughter? Not a right poem

  5. aww so sad. the last 4 lines made me almost cry love ur poem hope u make more.Brutal man brutal

  6. this poem is so sad i was crying

  7. omg this poem is so sad ifeel bad for the little girl it reminds me of the guy in my class,camron he was abused and torchered then one day he got put in boiled water he screamed and he was hurt hiis mom tried to help but all the dad did was pull out a braid out of her head,one time he was helping a girl with her bike riding and his brother saw him he ran inside and told his dad and he came out and beat him he was left with only cuts bruises he called the cops and they came he got arrested and now camron has a foster home and he has a loveing “mother” and he is in my class at school i feel bad for him and i never bring it up i never hint or never even say anything about beating around him. he only told this to me and my friend,brianna

  8. SAD!!

  9. I agree with them this poem is really sad and not funny at all :-(

  10. I agree it is really sad

  11. This poem is really sad nd i dnt kno how this is a funny poem

  12. i agree really sad i dont think the girl in the poem wouldnt be happy

  13. I like this poem, it shows how some things in life are hard to get over and what it can drive you to. It also shows the other side of life, let you know that life is not always good for other people and even though someone may be fine around you their homelife may be not so great.

  14. if this was real i would treat the daddy the way he treated his little girl

  15. Man this got me……….. it got me hard right in the gut. i hope its not true…………………….

  16. this is sooo sad and i hate it that parents will be able to kill there oh kids that the mom went throw pain then hurt her

  17. Dad may have taken his anger out on the daughter;
    the poem did not say why he got mad, I think may be he drinks and hit wife. Sad and scared girl.

  18. this poem is like my sis life …..

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