Death vs Me

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I’m struggling
I’m trying to beat it
It’s a match
With strength and endurance
Death keeps staring at me
With those devil eyes of his
Whispering things
No human has ever heard before
I’m not where I should be
I don’t think I ‘m ready on what
Is about to happen
I hold my eyes shut
Hoping that it is all a dream
I count to ten
Bu when I open
Death is still there
But now He is striding
Towards me
Befrore I know it
A pain comes upon me
Then it vanishes
I’m gone
It’s gone
Then I realized I’m dead
When I see a pool of blood
Surrounding my body
I’m dead
I’m gone
It’s gone..

by Pauline


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10 Responses to “Death vs Me”

  1. I liked that. That was like the best poem i’ve ever read in my entire life. I totally feel like that sometimes. It’s wierd how i can totally relate to that poem!

  2. being the person that is a hard judger, because of being a professional i love this i give you great points this is so well of a set up this is great. you did a very nice job giving the good detail. it was also really set well.

  3. ._. oh dear, ok, right many people can relate to poetry but please!!!! OTT! you may feel like it sometimes, but have you ever thought that prahaps the person who wrote it actually see’s this in the mind or dreams?? NO!!!!! yea some of us are nuts and see these things, BTW! nice poem dude keep it up

  4. wait…your not dead!!!

    = p

  5. Death is only an existence, it doesnt exist, we move on in our existence, death makes us fearful of what lies ahead in our paths. We try to understand what death is but the real truth is… we are death. We are dyeing every second we get closer to that dark abyss, a whirlpool of nothing. A good poem of what lies ahead. Its truthful…

  6. thanks mom! ofcourse im not dead. it wuz my homework. i had imagine myself as a person, and write a poem about an experiece of what that person may feel or w/e. but anyways im not dead!!!! ofcoursenot im not really emo people. but its pretty gd aint it

  7. cool, i like it :]

  8. I Love It

  9. love it

  10. that poem is like so cool i wanna die but i dont no y lol i just kiding omg im so emo!

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