Knife vs Life
(7 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
Loading ...SURGEONS must be very careful
When they take the knife!
Underneath their fine incisions
Stirs the culprit,—Life!
Filed under: Death Poems and Poetry
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YOU NEED A LIFE
bob is right you need a life. go and cut your wrist.
DON\’T cut your wrist! I liked ur poem. I always feel nervous when i go under. It was also simple to understand!
probably you are the sucessor of Carcass ‘ Jeff Walker when Alzheimer shall take this degenerated wasted humanity…
you did a great job. i bet if you really tried you could do even better. so dont listen to them, it is a great poem, short and simple.