CUTTER PART 2

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I slither to the bathroom
To breath
To live
To watch
my blood run down
my wrist
I take the blade
and slice open my skin
Just one moment of pain
Red crawls out my out skin
and plops to the floor…

by Pauline Gould ”Lenne”


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18 Responses to “CUTTER PART 2”

  1. this is deap!!!!

  2. You mean deep?

  3. i like how you wrote \"Red crawls out of my skin\". Its kool when writers do stuff like that.

  4. i feel ur pain

  5. i love this poem its awsome

  6. no offince but dont write from and emos (like me) perspective if you arent really emo and you dont really cut. it means your just pretending and pretending to be someone your not isnt cool…

  7. i love this poem is so cool

  8. I really liked this poem.. It tells you how you feel and what-not, you could have brought more depth into it but it was good as it was. It makes me want to go back to who I was and slit my wrist one more time with a razor

  9. i no how u feel….itz hard 2 4get thingz dat happen 2 u easly

  10. hey you can right so dont listen to emo babe its a free world any one can right

  11. i love this poem…i love YOUR poems!XD

  12. awesome poem!! very depressing!!

  13. awesome poem, very depressing!!

  14. Well, to the ones that take my poems to be offensive because I am not an emo or I don’t cut. If I feel like writing I will write. You have two choices either to love it or hate it. Pick which one, for all I care. I’m going to keep it real no matter what. I’m not some type of writer like stephanie myers that talks about a utopian world where there a little conflicts and shallow characters. No all of my work is going to feel like this is from a character with real actual problems in reality not in some stupid crazed novel

  15. pauline u r right. little emo girl u r right too! emo babe u r so wrong. Pauline can write wateva she wants to wheneva she wants to and howeva she wants to. Stephanie Meyer wrote about vampires and werewovles love and hate and that dont make her a vampire or a werewolf so think before you speak. That don’t mean nothing, it only means she wants to write. For all we know you could be a POSER, EMO BABE.

  16. for everybody that thinks this is an alsome poem they are wrong i know how it is to be a real cutter and to feel the blade going across ur skin and if u were really emo then u wudn’t feel any pain at all just pleasure

  17. you still dont deserve this pain i love u!!!

    love you

    love,jami

  18. wow thats a good poem.

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