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Loading ...It strolled down the hallways
It whisperd in my ear
Making my skin slither away
It said”Death is a coming”
It makes me do something
Quite fatal
I grab the rope
Tie a knot
Put my head through a loop
Life is all I hope
before I know it
I’m hanging their
I watch my body swinging in
the air
It made me do it
I hate It
Why
I know that I’m dead
I’m mesmerized
watching my body their
Lifeless
Death
All I hear is “Death is a coming”
by Pauline
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emo poem!!! it is so creepy. I LOVE IT! but it is still creepy and it gives me strange feelings through out the day.
that was very emotionally touching….now i’m going to write myself a death note….+_+
You sick freak!!!
i just hate how ppl make fun of ppl that cut there solves wen they do not even know why!!!!!!!! grr..;..!!!!!!!!!!
very nicely done i love it this is a very good poem. you did a very nice job setting the enviornment i really injoy it a lot.
that was really good. you really have a gift with words. You should publish this poem and a bunch more.
i love it
most peolpe would think its emo and stupid but i think it’s beautiful
Thats a very good poem. Its the kind of stuff i like to write, but u write way better than me.
how did you write it if your dead? dont joke bout dat sh*t
Woah! Loved it!! Im gonna show this on my show! =D DEATH ROX!
YOU ARE ALL WEIRD EMOS. PEOPLE THINK CUTTING YOURSELF IS WEIRD BECAUSE IT IS WEIRD, AND WRONG. LIVE LIFE TO THE FULL YOU EMO FREAKS.
Dat was a nice poem…i liked it…evn i rite those kinda poems…lolz…ma parents get worried bout me…:P:P…..keep ryting yer awsum poems :)….take care hunnie…muah
Its true death is always calling out to us, we are walking time bombs, we never know when death is going to reach out and take us..
Well done on the perspective of both illinguals, seeing the poem from one side of yourself it would have been boring, but using both sides of yourself and death makes the poem a central depression.
there’s nothing wrong by being emo! and all of yall mothafu*kers need to stop judging people! get a life DONT JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!
btw dat waz a pretty good poem:]
OMG… I LOVE IT!!!! THIS IS THE KIND OF STUFF I LIKE TO WRITE ABOUT. YOURE REALLY GOOD!!!
i love ur poem i think its reli awshum!
so touching i luv it …../…………/………../………/…/……./……death is soon
i love this poem it touched i place in my broken heart i think it is so beutyful and ppl should not joke about cutting because some ppl dont understand what we r going through in our lives i love the poem KEEP ON WRITING
this is a different poem it is just different ok
tht is 1 of the best ive read so far u should make more
i wrote a poem similar to this
after i passed out
i love it
this poem is about death this is not what i wanted
moo this is really stupid
hello people
that was awsome and there not emo freks they like to expres thier feelings and not all of them cut theirselvs im becoming emo so thier not the freak u r duhh and im not gonna cut myself ethier its just their personality and thier life style anyway good poem or storie
its awesome!!
I love it it is really good! oh and “your all wierd” what you said is bull sh*t! but anyway I really like this poem!
thats me…thats all i can say…all…thats all…thats just me….
whoever makes fun of ppl who cutt them selfs should go screw them selfs…u dont no why the person cutts and it makes u feel good….idc if u dont agree…but if u dont think cutting is rite its ok to say wat u think but dont and like such a di** about it. i was a cutter but i stoped cuz i almost died…so yeah dont be hating on the cuttters!
Lovely poem and ppl need to stop taking the mick out other emos and emos only cut because it feels right plus i’m becoming emo and emos r just emotional ppl and its a lifestyle