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It strolled down the hallways
It whisperd in my ear
Making my skin slither away
It said”Death is a coming”
It makes me do something
Quite fatal
I grab the rope
Tie a knot
Put my head through a loop
Life is all I hope
before I know it
I’m hanging their
I watch my body swinging in
the air
It made me do it
I hate It
Why
I know that I’m dead
I’m mesmerized
watching my body their
Lifeless
Death
All I hear is “Death is a coming”
by Pauline
Filed under: Emo Poems and Poetry
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(28 votes, average: 4.39 out of 5)
emo poem!!! it is so creepy. I LOVE IT! but it is still creepy and it gives me strange feelings through out the day.
that was very emotionally touching….now i’m going to write myself a death note….+_+
You sick freak!!!
i just hate how ppl make fun of ppl that cut there solves wen they do not even know why!!!!!!!! grr..;..!!!!!!!!!!
very nicely done i love it this is a very good poem. you did a very nice job setting the enviornment i really injoy it a lot.
that was really good. you really have a gift with words. You should publish this poem and a bunch more.
i love it
most peolpe would think its emo and stupid but i think it’s beautiful
Thats a very good poem. Its the kind of stuff i like to write, but u write way better than me.
how did you write it if your dead? dont joke bout dat sh*t
Woah! Loved it!! Im gonna show this on my show! =D DEATH ROX!
YOU ARE ALL WEIRD EMOS. PEOPLE THINK CUTTING YOURSELF IS WEIRD BECAUSE IT IS WEIRD, AND WRONG. LIVE LIFE TO THE FULL YOU EMO FREAKS.
Dat was a nice poem…i liked it…evn i rite those kinda poems…lolz…ma parents get worried bout me…:P:P…..keep ryting yer awsum poems
….take care hunnie…muah
Its true death is always calling out to us, we are walking time bombs, we never know when death is going to reach out and take us..
Well done on the perspective of both illinguals, seeing the poem from one side of yourself it would have been boring, but using both sides of yourself and death makes the poem a central depression.
there’s nothing wrong by being emo! and all of yall mothafu*kers need to stop judging people! get a life DONT JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!
btw dat waz a pretty good poem:]
OMG… I LOVE IT!!!! THIS IS THE KIND OF STUFF I LIKE TO WRITE ABOUT. YOURE REALLY GOOD!!!
i love ur poem i think its reli awshum!
so touching i luv it …../…………/………../………/…/……./……death is soon
i love this poem it touched i place in my broken heart i think it is so beutyful and ppl should not joke about cutting because some ppl dont understand what we r going through in our lives i love the poem KEEP ON WRITING
this is a different poem it is just different ok
tht is 1 of the best ive read so far u should make more
i wrote a poem similar to this
after i passed out
i love it
this poem is about death this is not what i wanted
moo this is really stupid
hello people
that was awsome and there not emo freks they like to expres thier feelings and not all of them cut theirselvs im becoming emo so thier not the freak u r duhh and im not gonna cut myself ethier its just their personality and thier life style anyway good poem or storie
its awesome!!
I love it it is really good! oh and “your all wierd” what you said is bull sh*t! but anyway I really like this poem!
thats me…thats all i can say…all…thats all…thats just me….
whoever makes fun of ppl who cutt them selfs should go screw them selfs…u dont no why the person cutts and it makes u feel good….idc if u dont agree…but if u dont think cutting is rite its ok to say wat u think but dont and like such a di** about it. i was a cutter but i stoped cuz i almost died…so yeah dont be hating on the cuttters!
Lovely poem and ppl need to stop taking the mick out other emos and emos only cut because it feels right plus i’m becoming emo and emos r just emotional ppl and its a lifestyle
BLood and hate. hate and agony. agony and death.
hey guys. well, i did this poem in computers class. i am not emo though hahah which is the funny thing about it. I am actually that very sweet funny girl. I just wanted to try this out. Umm,thanks for the comments.
Don’t cut yourself! there maybe someone that will miss u! My BFF is emo and i would hate it if she died! This poem scares me I dont want her to do stuff like dat.
wow i like this poem better than all i have read this ia an awsome poems i have been writing for a long time and i dont think i have ever wrote anythang like that i mean i wite about death all the time but this is amazing nice job
Wow this poem is special..
sweet like me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone has a story. people shouldnt judge. im not really emo but i am going through depression, i see a counselor every week. i’ve cut myslef before and honestly it is addicticting. it really does jus make you feel pain so you can feel alive…….im tired of being catorgorized.people say im populuar but i think no one should judge you. so yeaa you can still wear hollister and abercrombie and still have promblems. shit happens in life and people handle it differently. people with goth pants and people with hollister clothes could really be bestfriends if we all told our stories……and if my friends knew i was writing this they would laugh and say i was joking because thats jus how they are. im not usually like this. but i want to open up and hopefully someone understands. this poem is great !
I LOVED IT IT WAS VERY INSPIRING. IM GLAD I KNO SOME1 WHO FEELS THE WAY I DO
thanks for the reply mike. that’s my goal ,unstereotyping the sterotypes. i know, it sounds weird,but if everyone could be themselves and tell their compelling stories their wouldn’t as much prejudice against certain groups today
so emo i lov£ it and 4 all u emo haters just stop its not funny your kinda the reason we cut ourselves u just add to the pain i mean it realy gets on my nerves when some freaken prepy &*$#@ make fun of an emo in pain it realy does get on all our nerves :\
hey everybody!! Thanks for the comments.:) I don’t actually cut myself, but I felt like writing about something different. I went outside the box ,beyond it actually, and ended up writing up poems like these. I thought if I convey one message to readers it would that cutting is addicting like a drug. It’s funny how I wrote this last year in eighth grade. lol it’s pretty darn good ,isn’t it.
i love this poem it makes me fell better.its better to kno it will be ok … thanx
that was an awesome poem!
That really touched something in my lifeless heart. it almost brought tears to my wise eyes. that will stay with me for a long time… =)
it was a nyce poem i feel better–nyce use of words
People that think, Oh, yeah she/he is a cutter, look at those wrists those emo faggots, They don’t understand WHY we do it. They think, oh yeah, Little gay kids, go kill yourselves. When really their the stupid freaks who are making us do this to ourselves, Maybe they should consider, that we don’t give a damn, We are who we are. they can’t change that. I love this poem, <3
i wish there were words to explain how i feel about thuis poem but htre are not. good job my friend..good job..
to your all weird shut the f**k up you dont know what we go through every day and because of people like you is why we do this sh** none of you all understand us at all and maybe you should step in opur shoes for a day