Slowly Fading
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Loading ...The light slowly fading,
i saw that familiar puddle,
so dark and black,
i looked back to my wrists,
saw that smooth cut,
so fine under the blanket of blood.
i see this everyday,
each time looking so new,
i never seem to know why though,
that little trickle of blood,
letting it fall in that puddle,
turning so dark inside.
when i am done i clean the puddle,
the rag covered in red,
i grab my arm bands,
slip them over the fresh slashes,
pull my sleeves down around them,
throw the towel in the was and leave.
later i find myself sitting in my room,
sitting by the open window,
i stare down at the cuts,
thinking about what each one ment to me,
as i made each one so deep so sweet,
it leaves me thinking so quiet.
i fall asleep to my own soft cry,
and dream about the way i will die,
it comes to me so clear,
i wasnt meant to be,
i should not be in this world,
do i wake up or not?
M.G. Rose
by (A.K.A. Mariah/**emo love)
Filed under: Emo Poems and Poetry
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sweet poem, i can kinda relate to the last part of it.
Wow! This is really good! There are a lot of people out there that are like that too. Great job.
hey this peom is awsome it kind of explains me in a way so your great
LOVE It
u need help kid…
btw…just sayin..don’t kill yourself
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It touches my heart and i wanna live so im gunna cut myself
this poem is so deep and hats why i ove it i am the last two parts….
i feel the same way and i have done this too it helps because now i kno i am not the only one
Your weird…cutting yourself is not good
i love it! I can relate to it in every way
wow good poem it reminds me of me in a way i love it your great
you need help. JEWWWW
Wow u can write killer poetry, well literally, that was amazing.
sometimes drawing on my arms with colored sharpie markers is better than cutting, its almost better than tattoo
i can relate to this poem in every way. i cut, i like the blood, i think about what each one ment to me, and yes i dream of how i will die. i wasnt ment to be on this world i wasnt ment to be at all. im called “the accident” i am emo and everyone who has a problem with that is just an *** hole! i love this poem. thanks for writing it…at least i am not alone
i relate to this peom so very much.<3
i absolute lovedd this poem.. it relatess to me in everyway..by readingg this poem it makes me feel likee imm nott weirdd and thattt their is no problem with being emo.(;
thankk youu for writting this..
OMG yes this is sooooooo true im the same way n its nice to know that im not alone n all the people that pick on emos can just kill their selves cause this is how we really feel we dont truely belong but we are here n all yall hav to deall wth it
I loved this… i read this at school and almost cried for i knew this was me too… I tried to kill myself to be rid of the pain of being alone in the world… i know how you feel… this was deep.. it really touched me … I loved it… keep writing.
i can understand that i do it alot everydat bad
loves it more than anything i do it bad i think this touched me alot i love the pain
This is like the best one I’ve red yett
this realates to me in SO many ways. write more! your amazing!! *tear tear whip whipe*
i said write more!
Awwww! *(HUGS YOU)* by da way ppl who look up poems like this and leav hatefull coments need to get a life atleast we are living ours! ps> write moreeee
please don’t wake up. Your parents will not miss you. No one likes you because your a weird, whiny little emo kid. Loser
The pain you feel in this poem pales in comparison to the pain i feel knowing that i will never get back these 2 minutes of my life.
htat was asome hte way you wrote that it is so true
srry it was asome the way you wrote that
that is the beast
I Loved the poem. I relate to it as well… Your good at writing, keep at it! And just ingnore the hate comments… -Ashleigh-
im not emo or scene, yet i get called that like everyday and i wear black, my hair is long and dark, iwear skinny jeans and i show like no emotion, i want snake bits and my skin is pastey white… am i emo?
i just love it…… like others i can relate to the poem….. i used to cut before…. but i stop because of a promise to a girl…. i hate it… i miss doing that…. f**k this life damn!
i love this poem thnx for writing it!! <3 =D
This is a really touching poem.
I understand the whole ‘self harm’ scene. I don’t self harm at all, although I have in the past but not as major as that.
You should keep writing :’))
OMG!!!!! love it
ur poem rocks
This is me in a way i cant possibly explain. i love it thanks
Relates to me in every way possible <3
its s0 beautiful
like avery one i like it. but i am not a cuter. i am not emo. But i get what you are saying.
Hey, umm..I really like your poem. It is very touching. I believe you have much more talent than you think you may have. You have more talent than a lot of people wish and dream they could have. I have always wanted to be able to write poetry, but I can not. You can though, you are wonderful at it. You should wake up. I am just like you. I cut myself and burn..it is not something I need to do but I want to do it and it helps me. It hurts being depressed and emotional, some people can not help it. I wander every day if this will be the day I die. If this will be the day I take my life. But, for some reason it never is the day. I do not know why, maybe it was so I could read this poem. You have a true talent. remember that, always.
I feel like I have no place in the world, my boyfriends cheated on me and I can’t hold myself together, at least I’m not alone ):
That was amazing. I love to write poetry and I admit i cut so i relate to your poem… You have talent girl:) Don’t ever forget that!
What a beautiful poem…You are wonderful. Thank you…
Can totally relate. I know what place your in, Hope everything gets better. But dont kill yourself…wont help…trust me. makes life for others almost as bad as ours feels.
i relate to it i used to cut but i promised a girl i wpuldnt anymore lots o talent u should stop cutting tho burning is harder to notice if u birn urself
poem reminds me of me makes me cry actually…good job..uve broken down my defenses
Hey um…this poem is really good. I can really relate to it in every way. Good job.
wow, this poem is very touching, really, i love it, you are quiet talented!
keep it up
xx
i love this poem! i can so totally relate, its good to know i’m not the only one who thinks like that….
love this poem ….theres times were i dnt kno if i should wake up anymore .. i can relate to this poem so much
i am not gonna tell you this is good because you already know it is and so do i the thing is that i feel this everday and its hard but whats really hard is being on a bridge and wanting to jump i feel it every day so girl dont think your alone
This poem is so toughing it what i feel sometimes some days i feel so sad and cry myself to sleep sometime i just dont want to wake up anymore