The Blade

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She takes the Blade
And Carves her Life away
like you did her
*heart
her
*mind
and
*soul
through the lies you told…


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17 Responses to “The Blade”

  1. hey man thats pretty sad that you are that pathetic that you have to cry and b*tch and moan over one person get over your self you emo build a bridge and get the f**k over it..

  2. this poem is rather intresting, i would write something like this myself if i had the time and place to do it.

  3. i love it its so true and i wish this poem didnt reflect my life

  4. Y,know…This poem mite not cut me as deep if I wasnt guilty of the same crime…

  5. wow…

  6. wow that was so good!! spechless

  7. thts gd get ova it u dnt understand get a life its how they feel n mayb sum ppl do do stuff not tht u care

  8. PATHETIC

  9. i luv it

  10. cooooooooooool dude u rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  11. i like it but it doesnt really seem to be finished.

  12. I like the poem so true but you should add more that would make it a lil better but good

  13. i love it..it makes me think of my own life.and f*ck all of you who says its pathetic, its NOT!! some choose different ways to deal with pain and some have more then others..pain helps me deal..the sight or blood makes it better maybe for only a second, cuz the pain lasts forever. I LOVE THIS POEM absolutely amazing

  14. omgee, i love it, its short yet gets he point across, n all that dnt lyk it shld keep those comments to them self!

  15. to all the people who think this person is stupid for writing it.SHUT THE F**** UP!you have no idea what their going threw and never will so show some respect and if you dont have anything nice to say about it go screw off!btw i love the poem.it speaks from the heart and tells the truth about life

  16. Listen Dillon this is a place for people to espress there feelings so if you dont like it font click on it(: thank you have a nice day.

  17. This is really great, and I don’t care what anyone says, but some people said you should make it longer, how about this?
    Now she sits there
    Her heart growing cold
    All because of
    The lies you told.
    Or don’t change it at all. It’s good how it is.

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