YOUR DEATH
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Loading ...There were things you had wished for during moments in your life wishes like i wish my mom and dad were here by my side you wished for somebody to tell you that they were proud of you and that every thing was going to be alright there wasn’t going to be any more yelling every thing was suppose to be peaceful but that was just a fantasy in real life everything is going and you sit there screaming in your head for help but are to scared to say it out loud so instead you relive the pain by taking the blade and try to cut your life away there’s still a lot of pain inside your still in your stupid dam life your friends try to tell you that your doing some thing wrong so you tell them you don’t need any of their stupid sympathy you were tiered of bottling up all your feelings you may look normal on the outside but there was hurt on the inside looks don’t tell everything you looked happy but dam you were hurting all you wanted was for all the hurt to go away you don’t want any more pain can’t any body see this message of peer rage you told them you didn’t need any help that you could take care of your self the last time you cut yourself then you went through some trouble so you cut yourself again you told everybody that you didn’t care what they say you didn’t care that all your friends said you were putting your life through danger they told you the person you were becoming was a complete stranger you weren’t the person they met during the first days of school not the one who didn’t try to act all cool now as the memories start to come back you sit there watching as your blood and tears mix together you watch the blood flow down your hand outta your vain and with every drop of red blood you feel the pain slowly decreasing and you say to your self that you don’t care that people think that you don’t care that they thought being around you was troubling that they thought you were just a messed up teenager this is how you wanted your life nobody could have stopped you from living like that so as your blood drips off your fingertips you look at your cuts and think of how deep they must be you can’t stop the blood from rushing out and the pain decreasing and that’s all you need so as you sit there on your bedroom floor all dressed in black you look at your clothes and wonder how much blood you have lost and at last you take your last living breath and leave the world for eternity finally your heart stops pounding and your finally put out of your misery and your where you belong finally your put to rest.
By Brea Wilson
(this poem is dedicated to my sister Robbyn)
Filed under: Emo Poems and Poetry
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*TEARS* Im so sad that was a really sad poem i do the same thing but im sorry for ur lost
God damn. Im so sorry your life sucks. But there are alot of children in India and in Africa that are dying of hunger, malaria, small pox and aids. They were given up for adoption as small babies because their parents were killed by genocide. I dont think you have it that bad. And before you go and cry to the public about your “terrible” life, think about the people who are silenced and tortured everyday by the cruel world which THEY cannot escape. They have to deal with the cards they were delt. I think you should to. We are all struggling right now, with the economy as it is. Don’t be so selfish. If we all have to stay here, you should to..
Thats all i have to say.
pain only makes you stronger. thats what my dad said. and i wish he was right but… They tell us that suicide is the greatest piece of cowardice… that suicide is wrong; when it is quite obvious that there is nothing in the world to which every man has a more unassailable title than to his own life and person.
-Arthur Schopenhauer
thats so sad…. T_T
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I hope your life gets better.
that’s really sad…but don’t let your life be ruined and end just like that, you’re not the only person in his world who live a life like that, don’t give up dude…
take a look at the brighter side of life..
wow that poem says it all that is exactally how i fill also, that is the best poem i have ever read and i have read alot.
wow just keep on wrighting their so beautiful
the scary thang is that exactally everythang u said is how i fill.
this made me cyr soo bad my parent were asking why i was crying then i had to have i talk with them.
this is so much better than the ones that i write im going through the same theing nd i wish they were here but i know that there looking down nd saying ill protect you.
your parents are probably doing the same thing to you they want u to stop cutting nd live ur life ti the fullest.
i kno i dont i also cutt but ive noticed that i dont get anything forme that all i get is regrets nd so much more but the more u cutt the more posibility u have to cutt DONT DO THAT ANYMORE
im sorry you turely are a tourchered soul i love u!
love,jami
dont worry everything will be ok that happened to someone that i loved a lot but sadly he passed away:(
that was a sad but suprisingly wonderful poem :/
what a sad poem sort of biter sweet isn\’t it
i know how you feel i miss the days when tying my shoes was the hardest thing to do now its trying to get up and force my self to get dressed and go to school and thats how it is Yes or no
I know what it’s like to go thru A LOT, trust! And right now I’m resorting to cutting, any help? It’s like, when you get a taste of blood, you only want more.
that was the most beautiful poem ever people in africa may be haveing a super hard time but you cant fix everyones problems the world is messed up and in times like these you can try to hold your head up but someone will always be better but you cant stop it so tell them they can f**k them selves and be yourself i know that you can solve it witth a razorblade trust me i tried but in the end youll be gone and they wont care as much as they say they do so be succesful in life and when they drive taxies and cant pay rent say who’s laughin now like in jessie j”s song
just love and if they dont love you theyll be the one goin to hellanyway for the things they did god is the onley one who can judge you and me