You Torn My Heart

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You torn my heart into two,
Once before you said I love you,
Now I sit here all upset,
Wishing you were right beside me

One tough night has now passed,
My love for you will always last,
This pain for me is to much to bare,
The love we had is so rear

I grab this blade to finish the deal,
You will never understand the ways which I feel
I slice through my skin,
While drinking this bottle of gin,
My blood pours out,
As I cannot live without,
Your my love,
Your my soul,
So goodbye babe,
I love you.

By Stephen Moore


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9 Responses to “You Torn My Heart”

  1. i lov this poem been there n actually in passing it through now

  2. your poem was one of the best i relate to that poem…

  3. i love those poems i am goin through dat now n need ur help

  4. omg this is brilliant nearly had my sister cryin yeah i know its a little perthetic but she has gone through that pain i killed her
    thats exactly how she felt you should wright more maybe be famouse its awsome the stuff you can wright.

  5. is this true? thats terrible! beautiful poem, though.

  6. that is some awsome writing.i do relate.

  7. i na how u feel i have just been dumped and al i can do is cut myself it’s the only way i feel i can so my emotions

  8. I love this love poem (even though I\’ve never gone through heart break)

    I only hope this day doesn\’t come. :(

  9. i am goin through that now i love someone who loves me too but we cant even talk because my best m8 hates him and she is soooooo controling so i just sit and cut its not the best thing to do but i feel i cant do anything else and if i dont i will do something i will regret :(

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